Mulan's Story
CHAPTER 4-5-6
CHAPTER 4-5-6
- Mulan fights in many battles and win them all.
- One day a soldier handed a message from the Emperor to Mulan.
- Mulan had to visit the Emperor. When Mulan arrived at the temple, he Emperor offered many things but she just wanted ahorse to go home.
- When Mulan was about to go home, Ye Ming asked Huan Hu( Mulan) never forget.
- Mulan's family prepared a great feast for your arrival.
- Hua Hu was again Mulan.
- Mulan is happy to be at home again. Every day helps her father.
- One day Ye Ming visited the homes of Huan Hu(Mulan).
- Ye Ming was surprised when he saw Hua Hu, because it was not the same.
- Hua Hu(Mulan) had confessed her secret.
- Ye Ming asked Mulan, will you marry me? she said yes after talking to your father.
- Hua Hu and Mulan is married and lived happily for many years.
THE END...
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